Letter of Transmittal
25 October 2015
Madame Alice Goh
Senior Manager on Research Group
Building and Construction Authority
200 Braddell Road ZEB Level 3
Singapore 579700
Dear Madam Alice Goh,
RE: Reducing heat gain on east and west facade walls of HDB flats
We are pleased to present our proposal on reducing heat gain on the east and west facade walls in HDB flats which will ultimately reduce indoor temperature for greater energy efficiency and sustainability.
The content of this proposal consists of the current solutions, the advantages and disadvantages of the current solutions, the group's proposed solution and benefits.
Current solutions such as reflective paint, windows and green wall are able to reduce the indoor temperature and the amount of sunlight penetrating to a small extent in a HDB household unit in compromising the high initial cost, subsequent maintenance and lack of ventilation.
The group’s proposed solution is to implement water-cooled facade wall. It uses harvested rainwater to reduce indoor temperature of a HDB household unit. The advantages are it reduces the amount heat trapped indoors, decreases the amount energy consumption and minimises the damage to the ozone layer by reducing the emission of harmful greenhouse gases.
Your time spent on our proposal is greatly appreciated. We hope you will consider our proposed solutions to allow us to take a step closer towards responding to the HDB dweller needs, by providing them a conducive environment of living in Singapore.
Yours Sincerely,
Joey Neo
on behalf on ‘Js
SIE2016-Jason'sEffective Communication
Thursday, 3 December 2015
Js: Executive Summary
Executive Summary
Singapore is located at the north of the equator and with high
precipitation rate throughout the year makes Singapore a hot and humid country.
Singapore could experience higher temperature in the future.
Many Singaporeans who are living in HDB flat now are feeling
uncomfortably hot as the indoor temperature increases due to the heat being trapped
particularly on the east and west façade walls. As a result, HDB dwellers tends
to switch on the air conditioner and fan causing an increase of energy
consumption.
Water-Cooled façade wall is a method that utilizes harvested
rainwater to run through PVC pipes which are embedded inside the walls using
gravity feeds. Water-Cooled façade wall is able to reduce heat gain on the east
and west façade walls which will ultimately reduce indoor temperature for
greater energy efficiency and sustainability.
Water-Cooled façade wall is a solution that can reduces the
amount of thermal heat trapped indoors, decreases the amount of energy
consumption and minimizes the damage to the ozone layer by reducing the
emission of harmful greenhouse gases.
The benefits of Water-Cooled façade wall are reduction in
thermal heat trapped indoors, reduction in the amount of energy consumption,
and reduction in the damage to the ozone layer.
Water-Cooled façade wall is a beneficial, simple and
innovative method that reduces heat gain on east and west façade wall. It will
contribute towards the conservation and improvement of our environment for a
sustainable development.
Js: Personal statement
As an engineering student studying Sustainable
Infrastructure Engineering (Land) at Singpore Institute of technology, I always
feel that engineers are improving things that others think is perfect. I feel
that it is good to do something for the society that we live in. Global warming
is a world issue that everyone needs to play a part to combat this problem.
With our proposed solution to the problem of heat gain in HDB flat, we can
definitely protect the environment with the reduction of the harmful carbon emission
from the use of the air conditioners or fans for cooling down the room
temperature.
The role of peer and tutor feedback
The purpose of peer feedback is to provide us with more
opportunities to learn from the others. After each assignment, two or more
students can work together to check each other’s work and give comment on the
assignment. It can be in the form of corrections, opinions, suggestions, ideas
to each other. This form of learning can provide diversity as students do not
just listen to the tutor’s guidance but also work with the peer to do more
practices in the assignment.
In SIE 2016 Effective Communication module, the task of
giving and receiving feedback is a normal norm for us as we are given opportunities to give
feedback to our peers. This allows us to interact and learn from each other.
This kind of learning is very new to me as previously I only get feedback from
my tutor only. Thus, the interaction between my peers and I are very minimal. Therefore, I personally feel that I learn a lot from this module through the peer and tutor feedback.
I still remember that time when we just start setting up our
blog and were given a task to start writing on our first post. We were given a
choice between 2 topics to write on which are “The importance of English for
me” and “Our English Journey”. I took “Our English Journey” as my topic as I
feel that it is more relevant to me. Soon after, I published my first post on
my blog. For my second part of my assignment, I have to give feedback to 3
peers in my blogger group. They are Daniel, Joey and Shengda. At the start I
thought that giving feedback is simply sharing my thought on their post but after
receiving Mr. Blackstone feedback myself, I realize that I should not only share my thoughts but also give constructive feedbacks to our peers and help them to
lookout for their careless grammar mistakes. In this process, my peers and I
get to learn from our mistake and improve together.
While looking back on my blog posts, I found out that I tend
to make a lot of careless mistake in my writing. While receiving the feedbacks
from both my peers and tutor, I can filter out all the careless mistakes and
make improvement on my writing assignments. For example, the reader response
assignment, it took 4 draft before the finalized version can be prefect. Whenever I look at back
at the previous drafts, there is a clear improvement for the next draft. We do received feedback on our oral presentation too which help shape us into better presenter as a whole.Therefore, I
think that feedback is very important and we should integrate that into our daily life.
Finally, 12 weeks have pass and we are at the end of the
module, I definitely feel that I will apply what I have learn from this module
on the other modules during my course. Feedback will
play an important part in my future assignments as I feel that integrating feedbacks to my future assignments will bring benefits to me.
We all need people who
will give us feedback. That’s how we improve. – Bill gates
Reader Response Draft 4
In the
article “Explosive growth in Asian cities:
Bright ideas to 'seize the urban moment’” by Khanna (2015), the author mentions
that Asian cities have become the icon of the world's urban development trend
within this decade. Asian cities are having population influx which forces
these cities to expand. It is also a challenge for huge cities to provide
essential services like water and housing. According to the author South-east
Asia cities tackle this problem with their “flexible governments, resourceful
citizens and local infrastructure innovation." Using of technological
applications like QLUE can help reduce social challenge like water and flooding.
The author highlights that city governments should be “generative” and not only
invest in infrastructure but also use it to produce innovative “business
models” that help economic growth.
While I agree to an extent that both Asia and Southeast Asia
governments need to do more to improve the life of their people in their
countries, governments have to make use of this opportunity when urbanization takes
place in the country or city. I feel that the poorer people in South-east Asia
countries will not get to enjoy benefits like improved education, healthcare
and social services from this urbanization opportunity. As the benefits are
inaccessible with Southeast Asia countries like Laos and Myanmar are poorer in
nature and they cannot keep up with the stress from providing essential needs
like housing and water to the people due to the impact of the urbanization.
Firstly, the article “Explosive
growth in Asian cities: Bright ideas to 'seize the urban moment’” by Khanna (2015)
examines Indonesia as one case study which describes the strategic approach
that used by the Indonesian government like infrastructure upgrades or the use
of advanced technology to decrease the impact of urbanization and also to
contribute in the development of the country. The writer mentions that
Indonesia faced overcrowding in its cities due to the problem from mass migration.
It has also been mentioned in the article “Overpopulated Jakarta” (2010) mentions that it is not hard to see the problem
of congestion in Jakarta and “slums” can be seen in many areas in the city
which also include the river bank. The editorial also reports that the city
government issued a bylaw that only allows the “entry of migrants into the city,
with only those who have guaranteed jobs allowed to live in the city, while
officers of the city public order agency often conduct raids against illegal
residents.” But those efforts still fail to solve the problem of overcrowding
in the city. As the population grew every day and as the demand of essential
needs like housing and water grows; more social challenges may also pop out.
Therefore, I can conclude that the poorer people in South-east Asia countries will
suffer even more as times goes by with the lack of the essential needs like
housing and water in their country.
Secondly, Khanna (2015)
writes in the article that the use of the advanced technologies can help
decrease the impact of such social issues arising from urbanization. The writer
talks about Jakarta taking advantage of a “crowd-sourcing mobile application”
called QLUE that allows its residents to report to the authorities on any local
matters such as flooding, waste collection or traffic immediately. It was
reported in Woetzel (2014) that adapting of newly advanced technology is fast
in ASEAN. For example, mobile phones can be found almost everywhere across the ASEAN
region but there is a significant difference in “digital readiness and
capabilities by country”. For example, Indonesia is ranked 64th in the world in
terms of their readiness towards newly advanced technology, yet Laos being
another ASEAN country is ranked at 109th in the world. The author has also
mentions that there are differences in their digital development even between
countries even when they are located near each other. Therefore, not all
countries can use these newly advanced technologies like mobile application to
their advantages as there are huge differences between countries, in terms of
their business economic performance, governance practices and affordability of
such advanced technology. In conclusion, I believe that the using of advanced technologies
may not be suitable to all people in South-east Asia countries, especially to
those poorer people as they do not have the ability to afford such advanced
technologies as they are struggling to survive in their country.
In general, the article did emphasize on a few valid points
on the way how countries like Indonesia can make use of this opportunity to
improve their country using various methods like the use of advanced
technologies or infrastructure upgrades. However, poorer people in South-east
Asia countries like Myanmar and Laos, may not be able to enjoy the benefits like
improved education, healthcare and social services from the impact of the
urbanization at all. As these countries will not be able to keep up with the stress
from the lack of the essential needs like housing and water due to the
urbanization thread in their countries and cities.
(833 words)
References
Khanna , P. (2015, June 11). Explosive growth in Asian
cities: Bright ideas to 'seize the urban moment'. Straits Times. Retrieved from
http://www.straitstimes.com/opinion/explosive-growth-in-asian-cities-bright-ideas-to-seize-the-urban-moment
Resources:
Overpopulated Jakarta. (2010, August 21). The Jakarta Post. Retrieved from http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2010/08/21/editorial-overpopulated-jakarta.html
Woetzel, J., Tonby, O., Thompson, F., Lee, G., & Burtt, P. (2014, November).
Southeast Asia at the crossroads three
paths to prosperity. Retrieved from
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Wednesday, 2 December 2015
One person that inspired me
Is there ever been a person in your life that had inspired
you to do anything? For me that person will be my late grandmother. She is one
of the most self-motivated person that I ever knew in my life. No matter what
kind of problems she faced, she always seem to have a way to handle it.
Sometimes I also wonder how she get that kind of strength to deal with so many challenges in life. Being able to raise 6 children including my father single
handily makes me really wonder how she did it. I still remember whenever I
visit her, she always welcome me with a smile. She just doesn't seem to have
any problem in her life at all.
There was this particular scene that I can still remember despite
it happened a few years ago. It was during a family dinner when she told our
family that she has been diagnosed with leukaemia. The doctor told her that it
is in the 2nd stage and she needs to go for chemotherapy treatment
as soon as possible. The usual rowdy family dinner become dead silent and
weeping sound can be heard from everyone on the table. Whenever I think of this
scene, it can still bring tears to me. However, my grandmother said “不要哭了,我还没死。我会没事的, 一定会好起来。”. In English which means “Do not cry, I'm not dead
yet. I'll be fine and healthy in no time.” She then told us not to be sad and be grateful
as there is available medical treatment for her.
I still remember visiting her at the hospital when her
condition became worsen. Whenever I went to the hospital to visit her, she
always greet me with her signature smile. That was this particular day when I
ask her how she feeling now. She told me that she is feeling better every day
and the pain she suffer now will help her in fighting leukemia. She told me
that she wants to get better so that she can see us growing up and forming our
own family. She told me that she particularly hope that I can get into
university as I am the eldest son in my family.
Sadly, after fighting with leukaemia for 5 years, she pass
away. It was during my final year in polytechnic when she pass away. This
greatly affected me and I was unable to concentrate in class at all. My closest
friend, Rui Xuan was unable to bear to see me like that any more and decided to
wake me up from this nonsense. He said
to me that “do you really think that this is what your grandmother want? She
want you to excel in your academics and get into university.” This was when I wake up and decided
to work hard on my grade and get into university.
Now that I am in SIT, I want to finish this course and make
her proud. This is both my and her dream and I hope to be able to do it. This is a short
story of how a grandson is inspired by his own grandmother.
Difficult doesn’t mean
impossible, it simply means that you have work hard.- unknown
Tuesday, 10 November 2015
Oral Presentation Reflection
On
the 9th November 2015, my group and I had our first formal
presentation for the trimester. The task
of the day is to present our proposed solution that we came up with. I feel very nervous because my last oral presentation was 2 years ago.This presentation is very special to me as
this will be my first time doing a presentation without any cue card.
I
was feeling excited for the presentation as I will be sharing our solution
to the class.I knew that it will be a fun and exciting experience as we will
be answering questions from the class during the question and answer section. I feel that the questions from the class can definitely help us understand the flaws of the solution and make improvement on it.
I
tried my best during the presentation and it went pass so quickly. My peers feedback to me that I was speaking so fast when I am presenting to them. I realise my mistake and I should have slow down my pace so that the audience can understand the
content that I am sharing with them. During the presentation, I also forgotten what
I wanted to say during the slides and I decided to take a look at my phone to remember
what I wanted to present. Lucky for me, I manage to get back on track to finish the presentation.
I was very happy that the presentation slides were well received by the class
because the team and I spent a lot of effort and time on it.
I
was glad the presentation is over. From all the feedbacks I got from my peers,
I will learnt from my mistakes and improve for my presentation in the future.
“learn, unlearn and relearn”
“learn, unlearn and relearn”
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